創作內容

10 GP

[達人專欄] Red Thief【英翻中再創作】

作者:吉風翅│2017-08-15 23:36:08│巴幣:118│人氣:532
再度是久違的發文和英翻中系列
因為上次屬性框太多的經驗
這次就把前面的【天使之羽】拔掉了
雖然說是系列
但是每個故事都是獨立的,請各位放心觀看
當然有興趣的話也可以去前一篇觀看
然後是老話一句
先放英文原版,中文版請往下拉~  


  There was one time that my mother told me she wanted to be a butterfly. I could not remember when it was, maybe it was when I was helping her in the kitchen, maybe it was when we were walking to the village outside of our forest, or maybe when we were gazing at the beauty of the lake together. When I said I could not imagine her as a butterfly, she gave a wild laugh in her favorite crimson dress. That was she, a tall and strong woman, who inherited the blood of dragons. I never saw her as a dragon, but if she said so, I would trust her anyway. The villagers, however, did not call her a butterfly or a dragon– they called her the “Red Witch.”

   “So, you must be the daughter of the Red Witch.”
  
   A deep voice pulled me from the memory back to reality as I pushed the big and heavy door open. It shocked me; I definitely did not expect it. The owner ofthe voice was right in front of me. Right behind the door. Right inside the room of darkness.

  Hangman.

  Or hanged man.

  That was my impression as the dim light from the gray sky shone into the house, weakly projecting onto the man. If my information was right, he was the only person living in this house, which meant it was him that hanged himself. It should be right to call him a hangman, since he was not only the one hanging person, but also the one being hanged.

  However, it was not all that shocked me. Different from a normal hanged man, both of his ankles were hanged by a rope instead of his head. Adding to that, he was wearing a suit, which made the whole image looked more bizarre. The inverted strange figure made me think about a resting bat. I felt a strong disgust as soon as I saw the man, although I was not sure if I would feel the same way if seeing a normal hanged man.

  “Come in, daughter of Red Witch,” the hangman invited me in.

  I did not want to move, not even a little. It was true that my original purpose was to go into his house; at least I had tried to climb the hill just to get into the house. However, my first instinct told me to run away – my task had failed since the moment he saw me. A cold wind attacked me from behind. My body and legs started to tremble.
            
   “Come in, it’s quite windy outside,” he giggled. “Wasn’t it something that brought you here?”

  I hesitated, not knowing what to do. My mind stopped me from accepting the invitation, but my heart forced me to give it a try. I did not know if I would have theopportunity to do it again. Under such pressure, I looked back to the sky; it was still as cloudy as yesterday, the day before, and a week before. I had not seen real sunshine for a week, but only the fake light that showed vaguely from the clouds. Some crows were wheeling in the gray sky, looking for the next prey. Realizing I had no other choice, I stepped a little forward. One step forward, two steps forward, until I fully walked into the shadow.

  At the same time, the door immediately banged behind me in a speed that I could not even stop. Along with it, something grabbed my ankles and pulled them high up onto the air. My whole body was hanged like the body of the hangman. Gravity pulled mylong dress down and almost covered my head. I screamed for help, and tried to use one hand to put the dress back into the right place, while my other hand waved helplessly in the air.

  “What is this?” I cried.

  “Trap.”

  “What do you want to do?”

  “Well, I always like to talk to people face to face. Since I still don’t want to get down, you should be the one that comes up.”

  He giggled again. I doubted if he could really see my face in such darkness, at least I could not do that. What I could do at the moment was to keep swaying my body and hand, trying to escape from the string trapping me.

   “Actually…”he said. “That is the question I want to ask you – what do you want to do?Oops, let me correct myself. It should be…what you wanted to do?”
            
  His tentative question stopped my waving hand. I knew my face turned pale.
            
   “…Let me go,” I begged.

  “And let you steal something from my house?”

  He snapped his finger, all of a sudden the candles on the two sides of the wall lit up. Magic, I thought, mother could do the same thing, though I didnot usually see her using it. My stomach began to panic. The light of the candles climbed onto his smiling face and the rest of the room too. It looked like a warehouse,with many ropes growing from the ground, and behind him, a staircase led downward. No, that was not right. The ropes should be drooping from the ceiling and the staircase was supposed to go to the second floor. Everything looked weird in the opposite direction. Now the hangman looked like a vampire, greedily watching me for an answer. I bit my lips. There was a slight smell of blood, possibly from my lips. I released them.

  “…Why? Why do you know I am coming to steal?”

  “I have the feeling that the Red Witch will want the ‘Treasure from the Sky,’ and I have heard that she has a daughter. I was just not sure which would come, or if neither of you would come. There were still some chances, don’t you think so?”

  I followed his eyesight, and then found a piece of a pure white object sitting at the corner of the room. It looked like a huge feather, but for some reason I had a feeling that it was actually a wing. It must be the “Treasure from theSky” that I was looking for. I should have noticed it earlier.

  “So you have been hanging here and waiting for me?” My head started to feel dizzy. I had to get out from this situation as soon as possible.
           
   “That’s right. Plus, hanging myself is my interest.”

  “How did you know I am the person, the daughter of Red Witch that you are waiting for?”

  “Ms.Thief, you should at least remember to change your dress before coming here. Your red dress is as bright as the red that your mother loves.”

  “She made it for me,” pressing the bottom part of the dress to my knee, I said with a higher volume. Mother told me it was my birthday present, although I did not even know when my birthday was at that time. It was my first present. It wasnot that I forgot to change it – I was wearing my favorite dress to wish that my mission would succeed.

  “I need the ‘Treasure from the Sky,’” I whispered. “She is…”

  The image of the tall woman in red falling to the ground appeared in my head. The red dress on her was like a deadly flower, withering. I closed my eyes, saying with a quivering voice.

  “My mother is dying…I need it to help her recover.”

  Since the day that the sky became gray and cloudy, her body had become worse and worse. She was not the strong woman that I knew anymore, but only a patient.

  “I see. But why?” The hangman asked.

  “What why?” I cried to the cruel question, swaying my body more hardly. “She is my mother. I want to save…”

  “But she is not your real mother right?”

  He interrupted me successfully. He knew it.
  
   “Is she really worth you to become a thief?”

  My hand held my red dress tighter. I could never forget the time when we encountered each other. I was in the forest, abandoned, hungry and tired. She was wearing that red and beautiful dress, walking through the forest, and discovered me. I could never forget the warmth of her hands, the taste of the soup she gave to me, the smell of the flowers we later picked together, and the soothing voice that called my name. I could never forget, the feeling of a real home.

  I nodded. Up to down, or down to up; it did not matter.

  That was my conclusion.

  Warm tears flowed out from my eyes, passing my burning forehead and dropped to the ground.

  “We saw it…the day it fell from the sky to this hill.”

  That was one day after the sky became strange.

  I used my numb finger to point at the huge white feather.

  “She said there is a strong power on it…the most powerful magic on it…that is something from the other world…She pointed the house on the hill at the other side of village, and said it is at your place…and you won’t give it to her…These two days she was feeling very bad…she could hardly stand up…I ran away when shewas sleeping…I thought if I could get the ‘Treasure from the Sky,’ she won’t have to suffer like this. So please…”

  I continued weeping.

  “I really want to do something for her…She is a not a bad witch…she is harmless…she is my mother…I know she won’t want me to do something like this, she would never let it happen…but I cannot lose her…even if I have to become a thief. Please…if I can give anything or do anything for you, I will try to satisfy you. The only thing I need is…Ah!”

  My body suddenly fell onto the ground heavily. The rope on my ankles must have loosened or disappeared. I coughed and tried to stand up, but the parts of my body knocked on the floor were so painful.

  “The cost of it is way too high. You won’t want to pay for it, even I don’t want to pay for it.” The male voice in front of me said.

  My ears were buzzing, but I still could hear the sound of some other thing dropping onto the floor. While trying to turn my head to the direction of the hangman, I saw a pair of black leather shoes on the ground, reflecting the light from the candle flames. The hangman had come down. He was walking to me; his weight made deep sounds as he stepped on the wooden floor. While lying powerlessly and listening to his footsteps getting closer, I started to curse myself internally. I regretted not bringing anything to protect myself, or at least learning some magic frommy mother in the past, though she had never mentioned anything about teaching itto me. If I had asked her to teach me, would she teach me? Would I be stronger to at least pay something for her?

  It was already impossible to escape at this point, even if I was able move, he still could catch me easily using his magic. Nobody could rescue me, not even mymother. I wished I had chosen to stay beside her. I wanted to close my eyes,but I did not even have the energy to do so. The image in front of my eyesbecame vague.

  The hangman’s feet stopped a foot away from my head.

  “I changed my mind, daughter of Red Witch,” softly, he said.

  I could not digest the message coming above me. What did he say? What did I hear?

   “…What do you mean?” I asked, trying to gather all my energy to focus myself.

  “Since you have come and shown your determination, daughter of Red Witch,” it was hard to tell his intention from the expression on his face. “I will let you decide if you want to use it, use the ‘Treasure from the Sky.’ You should be the person to decide whether to pay for the cost or not.”

  “You are giving it to me?” I could not believe my still-buzzing ears.
  
   His face contained no happiness and anger; there was only heaviness on it. I swallowed. When I was thinking if I should just stand up and pick the “Treasure from theSky” and leave, his voice stopped me.

  “I don’t know if she has ever told you, little girl, but there is some invisible thing called ‘void’ encroaching our world. If we don’t care about it, the world is going to be destroyed.”

  I was confused. Why did he want to tell me about it? What did it have to do with the “Treasure from the Sky”? Seeing my puzzled face, the hangman bent down and got closer to me.

  “Listen, I am talking about the reason for your mother’s illness. She has been spending years trying to use her magic to fix the voids and to maintain the world. That works because so far she is the strongest witch in the world. She is different from the weak magicians like us; nobody could beat the inheritor of dragon, the Red Witch. However, the problem is, the amount of voids is increasing rapidly this week, I am sure you have noticed the sky has become unusual.”

  I could only listen silently to the story that I was never exposed to. Mother never mentioned anything about it to me. Was he trying to fool me? If so, he could have laughed at me, or make the same smiley face when I first saw him. Then why was he showing such a serious expression?

  “Unfortunately, even the most powerful Red Witch cannot afford the burden. She had already output too much energy on it, and the change of the world is still too fast. That is why she is so weak now.”

  He half closed his eyes, finishing the explanation.

  “By the way, although it is not the right timing, but what is your name, daughter of Red Witch?”

  “Garnet.” I mumbled out the name that my mother gave me, with other parts of my mind still remaining blank. I decided to ask the question that I had no chance to ask before.

  “Who are you?”

  “Only a friend of the Red Witch,” the hangman answered. I noticed the candle flames around us became unstable, as if they could extinguish at anytime. I had anominous feeling for whatever that was coming up.

   “Then, Garnet, be ready,” he said. “I am going to let you make the most difficult decision ever.”
 

  *

 
  “Mother, mother…” I tried to wake the woman sleeping in bed. Her arms were now full of scales. They were red, similar to the color of the dress she was wearing. I could feel how crude and cold they were, like the scales of a real dragon. I had never seen her like this. Her body worsened since I left our home.

  She opened her eyes.

  “Garnet, what are you doing here?”

  “Mother, I got it, I got the ‘Treasure from the Sky!’”

  Her tired face was mixed with a little confusion.

   “You have it? How?”

  “The weird man, the hangman who lives on the hill gave it to me. He sent me back to the forest. We flew on the sky, he said that is faster. He is waiting outside ofour house now.”

  I rushed my words, trying to let mother understand my adventure. There was also half of nervousness in it.

  “Hangman? Ah, I see,” After listening to my poor explanation, she smiled. There were somered scales on her left cheek too. “That means now you know the reason that he doesn’t want to give it to me, don’t you?”

  I suddenly lost my language, but then nodded, remembering what the hangman had told me earlier.

  Although the ‘Treasure from the Sky’ has a strong magical power in it, it is still not enough to fix all the voids. However, it will be different if the Red Witch decides to contribute herself, including all of her magic and her life to it. That is the cost of the ‘Treasure from theSky.’ You know what kind of woman she is. Once she gets it, she will definitely use it to protect the world, even if she has to pay her life for it. It is only a matter of time for her to die earlier or not. It is just like a “U”, you will go the same direction anyway, the only difference is that you have two different routes to choose from. Now you shall choose to pay for the cost or not, let her end her life earlier or not.

  “Do you want to let me use it?” my mother asked.

  After a long silence, I nodded. The hangman told me that he had chosen to let mother stay in the world for longer, but my arrival brought him a third choice, which was to leave the choice to me. I could start to understand why he did not want to give the “Treasure from the Sky” to mother already, but as he said, I knew what kind of woman mother was. She would rather sacrifice herself than live the life she had now. This day must be the day I cried the most. I picked up the hugewing-like feather from the ground and passed it to her. She nodded too, and touched it softly.

  “Garnet, can you open the window for me?”

  I followed her instruction, stood up from the chair beside her bed, and walked to the window. I opened it with my face full of tears. Mother sat up on the bed.

  “I guess my friend waiting outside is willing to help me to take care of you. Did he say that to you?”

  I nodded. My body still hurt; it reminded me of the unpleasant experience before in the house on the hill. Nonetheless, the hangman eventually gave the“Treasure from the Sky” to me and brought me back to here, plus he was mother’s friend, so I guessed he was not a bad person at all.

  “As long as he doesn’t ask me to hang myself with him, I guess,” I tried to draw a smile on my face, just for my mother.

  “You will be fine,” she laughed, made me remember how she usually behaved. She then kissedmy forehead. “Take good care of yourself.”

  I knew it was her good-bye sign.

  She closed her eyes. The ‘Treasure from the Sky’ on her hand began to glow. In the brightness of the sacred white light surrounding the feather, her body turned into multiple light particles. Then, the light particles became red, and transformed into the shape of butterflies. The countless red butterflies flapped theirwings eagerly, and flew through the window I just opened.

  I rushed to the door of the house and opened it, trying to follow my mother. The hangman was there, outside of the house, hanging himself under the eaves with a ropethat I did not know where he got from. He saw me and made a simple greeting,but soon turned to see the sky scattered with red butterflies. I did the same too. Before the clouds dismissed and the sky recovered to its usual clear blue,we both stood there, watching the view of the red butterflies stealing the whole sky.



這裡是英文版和中文版之間的轉換站
雖然大部分人應該都是直接往下拉
但是如果真的有人看英文版而且有發現英文錯誤的話
絕對要告訴我讓我改正喔XD
那麼下面是中文版


  以前我的母親曾告訴我說她想變成一隻蝴蝶。
 
  我不記得那是在什麼時候,也許是我在廚房幫她忙的時候,或者是當我們離開居住的森林到附近的村子的時候,又或著是我們兩個一起欣賞附近的湖水之美的時候。
 
  當我回答她說我無法想像她成為一隻蝴蝶的時候,她狂野地笑了,穿著那身她最喜歡的猩紅色裙子。這就是她,一個高大又強壯的女人,同時也是繼承龍之血的女人。我從來沒看過她變成龍的樣子,但是既然她這麼說了,我選擇相信她。然而,那些村民們從來都沒有以蝴蝶或是龍來稱呼她,而是稱她為「紅女巫」。
 
  「所以說,妳一定就是紅女巫的女兒了。」
 
  就在我把眼前又大又重的門推開時,一道低沈的聲音把我從回憶中帶回現實。
 
  怎麼會?我完全沒有預料到這件事。
 
  聲音的主人正站在我的面前。
 
  站在門的後方。站在黑暗的房中。
 
  倒吊男。
 
  被吊著的男子。
 
  這就是當微弱的光線從灰暗的天空照射到屋內的他時,我對他的第一印象。
 
  如果我的情報是正確的話,他是唯一住在這屋裡的人,
 
  這也就代表是他把自己吊起來的。
 
  但是這不是唯一使我嚇到的原因。
 
  不像一般被吊著的人,被繩索套住的不是他的頭而是他的腳踝。而且他身上穿著一套暗色的正裝,讓整個畫面看起來更詭異。上下顛倒的那人讓我想起了一隻休息中的蝙蝠。一陣強烈的噁心感在我看到那人的同時立即襲來,雖然我不確定自己看到一個正常的被吊起來的人會不會也有這種感覺。
 
  「進來吧,紅女巫的女兒。」那名倒吊男邀請我進入屋內。
 
  我不想移動,一點也不想。我原本的目的本來是進入他的房子沒錯,至少這就是我辛苦爬上這座山地目的。然而,我的直覺叫我要趕快逃跑——在他看到我的那一瞬間,我的任務早就已經失敗了。冷風從我身後襲來,我的身體和腳也開始顫抖。
 
  「進來吧,外面現在可是在颳著風。」他咯咯笑。「妳不就是為了什麼而來到這裡的嗎?」
 
  我遲疑了,不知道該做什麼。我的思緒阻止我接受他的邀請。但是我的心正強迫我去放手一博。我不知道自己之後還會不會遇到這樣的機會。
 
  在無法做出選擇的壓力下,我回頭望了一下天空。
 
  天空果然還是像昨天一樣烏雲密佈,像前天一樣,還有像一星期以前一樣。我已經一個星期沒有看見真正的陽光了,頂多只有從雲朵中微弱探出的虛假光芒。一些烏鴉正盤旋在空中,尋找下一個獵物。
 
  沒有其他的選擇了。
 
  我握起拳頭,向前踏出一小步。一步、兩步,直到我完全步入陰影中。
 
  就在這個瞬間,那扇門馬上在我身後以無法阻止的速度「碰」地一聲關上。有什麼東西抓住了我的兩隻腳踝,把它們拉到高空中。我的整個身體就如那個倒吊男一樣被吊起。地心引力把我的長裙往下拉,讓它差一點蓋住我的頭。我尖聲呼叫,試著用其中一隻手把裙子壓回去,然後另一隻手無助地在空中揮舞。
 
  「這是什麼?」我哭喊道。
 
  「陷阱。」
 
  「你想做什麼?」
 
  「這個嘛,我喜歡與人面對面交談。因為我不想下去,就只好請妳上來了。」
 
  他再度咯咯笑。我懷疑他在黑暗中是否真的能看見我的臉,至少我無法做到。我現在唯一能做的就是繼續揮舞我的身體和手,試著從困住我的繩子中逃出。
 
  「其實呢——」他說。「那應該是我要問妳的問題——妳想要做什麼?哎呀,請容我訂正一下,應該說⋯⋯妳本來想要做什麼?」
 
  他試探性的問題停住了我搖動中的手。我知道我的臉已經開始發白了。
 
  「⋯⋯讓我走。」我哀求道。
 
  「然後讓妳從我家偷東西回去?」
 
  他彈了個響指,忽然間兩側牆上的蠟燭都被點燃了起來。是魔法。母親也能做到相同的事,雖然我從來沒看過她在我面前使用過魔法。我的肚子開始絞痛了起來。
 
  蠟燭的亮光攀上他的笑臉以及房間的其他地方。這地方看起來像一間倉庫,有著無數從地上長出的繩子,還有向下延伸的樓梯。不對,不是這樣的。繩子應該是從天花板降下,樓梯也應該是往上到二樓才對。所有的東西從反方向看來都變得好奇怪。
 
  現在那個倒吊男看起來像一隻吸血鬼,貪心地看著我索取答案。我咬住嘴唇。有一絲鮮血的味道,可能是來自嘴唇的血。我釋放自己的嘴唇。
 
  「⋯⋯為什麼?為什麼你知道我要來偷東西?」
 
  「我有預感,紅女巫會想要『來自天空的寶藏』。我也聽說過她有一個女兒。我只是不確定哪一個會來而已,又或者誰都不會來。不論哪邊都有可能發生。妳不覺得嗎?」
 
  我順著他的目光,發現了一片純白的物品躺在房間的角落。它看起來像一個巨大的羽毛,但是因為某些原因,我有一種它其實是一隻翅膀的錯覺。那一定就是我要尋找的「來自天空的寶藏」了。我早該注意到它的。
 
  「所以你一直都吊在那裡等我到來嗎?」我感到一陣暈眩,得從這個狀況中盡快逃脫才行。
 
  「沒錯。順帶一提,把自己吊起來是我的興趣。」
 
  「你怎麼知道我是你要等的人——紅女巫的女兒?」
 
  「小偷小姐,妳至少應該在來到這裡之前把妳那身裙子換掉。妳裙子上的紅正和妳母親所喜歡的紅一樣明亮。」
 
  「那是她為了我做的。」我把裙子的下襬按到膝蓋上,用更高的音量說道。那是不久前母親送我的,她說過那是我的十一歲生日禮物,雖然我那時並不知道當天是我的生日。那是我收到的第一份禮物。我沒有忘記把它換下來。我是特地穿上這件自己最喜歡的裙子祈求自己的任務能夠成功。
 
  「我需要『來自天空的寶藏』。」我輕聲道。「她⋯⋯」
 
  高大女人倒在地上的畫面出現在我腦海中。她身上的紅裙就像一朵即將死去,凋謝中的花。我閉上雙眼,用顫抖的聲音說:
 
  「我的母親就快要死去了⋯⋯我需要『來自天空的寶藏』來讓她恢復。」
 
  自從天空變得灰暗,被不祥的雲層覆蓋住,她的身體情況就變得越來越糟。她不再是我所知道的那個強大的女人,而是一名普通的病人。
 
  「我知道了。但是為什麼呢?」倒吊男問道。
 
  「什麼為什麼?」我對那個殘忍的問題哭喊道,更用力地擺動我的身體。「她是我的母親。我想要救——」
 
  「但是她又不是你的親生母親對吧?」
 
  他成功打斷我。他早就⋯⋯知道了嗎?
 
  「她真的值得妳當上小偷嗎?」
 
  我緊抓著自己的裙子。我從來忘不了我們相遇的那一刻。我被遺棄在森林裡,又飢餓,又疲累。她穿著那件又紅又漂亮的裙子經過那座森林,然後發現了我。我從來忘不了她那雙手的溫暖、她給我的湯的滋味、我們之後一起去採的鮮花的香味,還有呼喚我名字的那道溫柔的聲音。我從來忘不了,一個真正的家的感覺。
 
  我點頭。從上到下,或著從下到上。不論是哪邊都一樣。
 
  這就是我的結論。
 
  溫暖的眼淚從我的眼睛流出,經過我發燙的額頭,然後墜至地上。
 
  「我們看到了——它從天空掉到山上的那一天。」
 
  那是在天空變得奇怪後的某一天。
 
  我用變得麻木的手指指向那個巨大的羽毛。
 
  「她說那上面有強大的力量,最強大的魔法,是從別的世界來的某樣東西。她指了在村落另一邊的山上的房子,說這是你的地方,而且你是不會把那個東西交給她的⋯⋯這兩天她的身體狀況變得很糟,已經幾乎不能站起來了。我趁她在睡覺的時候跑了出來。我想說如果我能得到『來自天空的寶藏』,她就不會這樣受苦了。所以求求你⋯⋯」
 
  我繼續啜泣。
 
  「我真的很想要為她做些什麼,她不是一個壞女巫,她是無害的,她是我的母親。我知道她不希望我做這件事,她不會讓我這麼做的,但是我不能失去她,就算要我成為小偷也一樣。所以拜託你,要我做什麼都可以,我只需要——啊!」
 
  我突然重重地掉到地上。腳踝上的繩子一定是鬆脫或是消失了。我劇烈咳嗽,試著站起身,但是撞擊到地板的身體部位發疼。
 
  「它的代價過於慘重。妳是償還不起它的,就連我也一樣。」眼前的男子說道。
 
  耳邊響起嗡鳴聲,但是除那之外還聽到了什麼東西掉落到地面的聲音。轉頭看去他的方向的時候,我看到一雙反射著蠟燭火焰的黑色皮鞋。
 
  倒吊男降下來了。
 
  他走向我。那副身體的重量讓地板發出嘎吱聲。
 
  聽著他的腳步聲,我無力地躺在地上暗自詛咒著自己。我後悔自己沒有帶任何東西來保護自己,或者至少以前跟母親學一些魔法,雖然她以前也沒有提過要教我魔法。如果我當初叫她教我的話,她會教我嗎?我會至少變得更強來幫她償還什麼嗎?
 
  現在已經來不及逃跑了。就算我能動,他也能輕易利用魔法抓住我。沒有人可以拯救我,就連母親也一樣。我希望我之前選擇留在她身邊。
 
  眼前的影像逐漸變得模糊。
 
  倒吊男的腳停在離我的連只差幾步的距離。
 
  「我改變我的主意了,紅女巫的女兒。」他輕聲說道。
 
   我無法消化從上而來的訊息。他說了什麼?我聽到了什麼?
 
  「⋯⋯什麼意思?」我把所有能量集中起來專注問道。
 
  「既然妳已經展現了妳的決心,紅女巫的女兒。」我無法從他臉上的表情判斷出他的意圖。「我會讓妳來決定要不要用它,用那個『來自天空的寶藏』。妳應該成為決定要不要來償還這份代價的人,紅女巫的女兒。」
 
  「你要把它給我嗎?」我不敢相信自己直到現在還在嗡鳴作響的耳朵。
 
  他的臉上顯現的不是高興或生氣的神情,而是與外面天空一樣的沈重。我吞了一口水。正當我遲疑該不該直接站起來把「來自天空的寶藏」拿走離開,他的聲音阻止了我。
 
  「我不知道她有沒有告訴妳,小女孩,但是有種叫做『空洞』的東西正在侵蝕我們的世界。如果我們放它不管的話,這個世界很快就會被摧毀掉。」
 
  我不知該如何是好。為什麼他要告訴我這個?這跟「來自天空的寶藏」有什麼關係?看到我困惑的表情,倒吊男彎腰湊近我。
 
  「聽著,我在說的是妳母親生病的原因。她數年來都在用她的魔法填補『空洞』,試著維護這個世界。因為她是這世上最強的女巫,所以至今以來這個方法都行得通。她不像我們這些弱小的魔法師——沒有人能夠與龍的繼承者,那位紅女巫匹敵。然而,現在的問題是『空洞』的數量在這個星期突然增多。我相信妳也注意到天空變得不尋常了。」
 
  我只能靜靜地聆聽著我從來沒有聽說過的故事。母親從來沒有提過任何有關「空洞」的事。難道眼前的這個人在騙我嗎?如果是的話,他大可對我放聲大笑,或是露出一開始見面時那個嘲弄的笑臉。但是為什麼他現在的表情那麼嚴肅?
 
  「很不幸的,就算是最強大的紅女巫也不能承受如此負擔。她已經輸出了太多的能量,而這個世界的變化得太快了。所以這就是她現在如此虛弱的原因。」
 
  他半閉眼睛,結束解釋。
 
  「好了,雖然這個時間點有點怪,但是妳的名字是什麼,紅女巫的女兒?」
 
  「石榴。」我低喃母親贈與我的名字。腦中的另一半仍是一片空白。我決定問起之前沒能問出的問題。
 
  「你是誰?」
 
  「只是一個紅女巫的朋友罷了。」倒吊男回答。周圍蠟燭的火焰紛紛搖曳起來變得不穩定,就像隨時都有可能熄滅一樣。
 
  我有一種不祥的預感。
 
  「那麼,石榴,做好心裡準備吧。」他說。「我要讓妳做出這輩子最困難的決定了。」
 
 
  *
 
 
  「母親,母親⋯⋯」我試著叫醒正在床上睡覺的女人。她的手臂現在佈滿了鱗片。紅色的,有點像她平常穿的那件裙子的顏色。我能感受到它們的粗糙與冰冷,就像一隻真正的龍的鱗片。我從來沒有見過她這副模樣。她的身體比起我之前離開時又惡化了。
 
  她睜開她的眼睛。
 
  「石榴,妳在做什麼?」
 
  「母親,我得到它了。我得到『來自天空的寶藏』了!」
 
  她疲憊的臉上混著些許困惑。
 
  「妳得到它了?怎麼會?」
 
  「那個奇怪的男人,那個住在山上的倒吊男把它給我的。是他把我送回森林的。我們剛剛還在天空上飛,他說這是最快的方法。他現在就在我們家的外面等。」
 
  我一鼓作氣把話都說完,試著讓她瞭解我剛才的歷險。其中還摻著一半的緊張。
 
  「倒吊男?是嗎?我知道了。」聽了我差勁的解釋以後,她微笑道。她左邊的臉頰上也有一些紅色的鱗片。「這代表妳已經知道他不想把它給我的原因了吧。」
 
  我突然說不出話來,但還是點頭,想起倒吊男之前對我說過的話。
 
  雖然「來自天空的寶藏」寄宿著強大的魔力,它還是不足以修復所有的「空洞」。但是,如果紅女巫決定犧牲她自己,包括她所有的魔法和生命,那又另當別論了。這就是「來自天空的寶藏」的代價。妳也知道她是什麼樣的女人。如果她得到了它,她一定會用它來保護這個世界。現在只是她何時會死去的問題而已。不管哪個選擇最終只會前往同樣的方向,唯一的不同只是妳有兩條道路可以選罷了。現在是妳決定要不要償還這份代價,要不要讓她的生命提早結束的時候了。
 
  「妳想讓我使用它嗎?」我的母親問道。
 
  在一陣漫長的沈默後,我點頭。那名倒吊男告訴我說他選擇了讓母親能夠在這世上待久一些,但是我的到訪帶給了他第三個選擇,也就是把那個選擇權轉移給我。我已經能理解他之前為什麼不想把「來自天空的寶藏」交給我的母親了,但就像他之前所說的,我知道母親是名怎樣的人。比起像現在這樣活著,她會寧願犧牲自己。這一天一定是我哭得最多的一天。我從地上撿起那個像翅膀一般的巨大羽毛,交給母親。她點頭,輕輕地觸碰它。
 
  「石榴,妳可以幫我打開窗戶嗎?」
 
  我遵從她的指示,從床邊的椅子站起走向窗戶。打開窗戶時,眼淚早已佈滿了我的臉,母親則從床上坐起。
 
  「我猜我那位站在外面的朋友會願意幫我照顧妳的。他有跟你提過這件事嗎?」
 
  我點頭。我的身體至今還感受得到疼痛。這提醒我之前在山上那座房子的經歷。然而,那個倒吊男最後還是把「來自天空的寶藏」給了我,還帶我回家,加上他又是母親的朋友,所以我想他應該不是壞人吧。
 
  「只要他不要叫我跟他一起吊起來的話,應該還能接受吧。」我為了我的母親,在臉上劃出一道笑容。
 
  「妳會沒事的。」她笑了,這讓我想起她平常的樣子。她接著親吻我的額頭。「要照顧好妳自己。」
 
  我知道那是道別的徵兆。
 
  她閉上她的眼睛。在她手上的「來自天空的寶藏」開始發光。在圍繞著羽毛的神聖白色光亮之中,她的身體轉化成無數的光粒。接著,那些光粒變紅,轉換成渴望飛舞的蝴蝶的身形。
 
  數不清的蝴蝶拍動翅膀,飛出我剛打開的窗戶。
 
  我衝向家裡的門並打開它,跟隨我的母親。倒吊男就在那裡,在房子的外面,用不知從哪裡拿來的繩子把自己吊在屋簷下。他跟我打聲簡單的招呼,但隨即就望去有紅色蝴蝶振翅的天空。
 
  我也一樣。
 
  在烏雲散開,露出晴朗的藍空之前,我們一直都待在那裡,看著紅色的蝴蝶偷取整片天空的景象。




跟上次的Stargazing一樣
這是一年前英文課的產物
名字翻譯有點困難
Hangman就翻成倒吊男
而Garnet不用音譯而是直接用石榴果然有點怪吧
雖然這是那堂課裡我寫過評價最高的一篇故事(名字倒是評價不高)
但是反而是我比較不那麼喜歡的故事呢
各位的感想又是什麼呢?XD
引用網址:https://home.gamer.com.tw/TrackBack.php?sn=3685058
All rights reserved. 版權所有,保留一切權利

相關創作

同標籤作品搜尋:吉風翅|Red Thief|天使之羽|英翻中再創作

留言共 5 篇留言

月影
我好喜歡吉風的寫的故事喔((≧▽≦)

08-16 14:14

吉風翅
((≧∆≦)08-17 12:26
夏懸/今生再無悲喜
這次有種淡淡的哀傷呢,很喜歡這種帶點童話風格的文風
話說原本想挑戰英文的,結果看三行就陣亡,太久沒複習ㄌ :(

08-16 18:58

吉風翅
童話風已經幾乎變成教授對我的小說印象了
其實如果是我看到一大堆英文也好想放棄(喂)08-17 12:28
薄荷
答應要看後發現篇幅這麼長還是中英文,後悔也來不及啦XD
敝人只有看英文部分。
話說英文寫作最可怕的地方就是時態,
以前把中文作品改成英文拿去交作業就頭痛得要死ry
基本標點:刪節號是六個點......破折號要佔兩格──
不知為何中文標點正確但英文就沒有了。

"A deep voice pulled me from the memory back to reality"
這不算錯,只是個人覺得from the memory是多餘的。
"the dim light from the gray sky shone inside to the house, weakly projecting onto the man"
inside to改成into較順。前面已說明是黯淡的光,後面的「微弱地照在某人身上」也有點重複強調。
"he was not only the one hanging person, but also the one being hanged."
the one已經有「那個人」的意思,後面再加person就多了。
"A cold wind attacked me from behind, my body and legs started to tremble."
這句有兩個主詞(wind, body&legs),中間該用分號或另起一句。
"and tried touse one hand to put the dress"
tried to V或tried V-ing

(破千字了只好分兩次發)

08-18 12:29

吉風翅
老實說我還蠻驚訝的
第一次看到有人說只看英文版不看中文的XD
我有依照建議修改了一些文法錯誤,有一些微妙的部分就先放置了w

1. 英文和中文的刪節號和破折號是不同的,我那邊沒有用錯
2. from the memory 暫且先放置了
3. inside to 已改 into,dim和weakly放置
4. 「the one hanging person」這邊我是想表達「把人吊起來的人」,所以不是只有「那個人」。但是這樣「hanging」是不是得改一下呢?
5. 雙主詞這邊我同意,已另起一句
6. 本來應該是tried to use,但是從Word 複製過來巴哈的時候幾乎每一行都會有某些字連起來的問題。雖然之前有檢查硬塞空格,但是還是疏忽了。 08-18 16:05
薄荷
"There was a slight smell of blood, possibly from my lips. I released them."
對照翻譯是:「我釋放我的嘴唇」這句的中英文都怪。
首先前面講到了血,後面出現的them就會被解讀成代指血而非嘴唇。
原先還能勉強解成「我讓血往下滴」,但看你翻的中文,
想表達的意思應該是放開緊咬的嘴唇、開口。
「釋放」用起來太過了,意思有點偏且不太協調。
"Is she really worth you to become a thief?"
Is應改為Does,用Is就要用Is she really worthy for you to......
"I will try to satisfy you, I only need…Ah!"
The only thing I need is......比較合適,且這句同樣有雙主詞問題。
"the hangman lives on the hill gave it to me"
lives前加個who比較順。

以上,雖說是本科出身但還是不夠專業的意見XD

08-18 12:29

吉風翅
7. released 這邊暫時還想不出怎麼改,先放置
8. 剛剛去查了一下,worth的造句很多都是is而不是does,所以我目前的用法應該是對的(?)
9. The only thing I need 聽起來比較順沒錯,已另起一句
10. 已在lives前面加 who

謝謝薄荷抽空來這邊閱讀並留言
雖然那個英文版已經是有班上的人幫忙看過並修改好的版本,但是難免會有一些遺漏之處
以後也歡迎來小屋互相交流!08-18 16:10
ボカロの巫女Rana
還滿期待接下來的發展,是很正統的奇幻故事呢XD
每次看你的故事都覺得對話跟背景的描述分配的不錯,看完整個覺得很舒服,有享受到故事的內容。
過去看過夏娜小說時真的是被作者那冗長的背景描述遭受到多次的精神打擊,對讀者來說真的是種折磨...Orz

09-02 18:58

吉風翅
謝謝誇獎XD
其實我家裡有夏娜第一、二集加外傳
當初就沒有很喜歡敘述就沒繼續收了
沒記錯的話,那時候應該就是覺得節奏太慢(有可能就是你說的背景描述冗長吧)09-02 20:37
我要留言提醒:您尚未登入,請先登入再留言

10喜歡★yoshifg 可決定是否刪除您的留言,請勿發表違反站規文字。

前一篇:[達人專欄] 虛構安魂曲... 後一篇:[達人專欄] 【活動】月...

追蹤私訊切換新版閱覽

作品資料夾

kuso12336拉拉拉
【漫畫】【那個啥黑砂!?】跟朋友們的日常漫畫更新中! 無聊可以來看看~看更多我要大聲說昨天08:38


face基於日前微軟官方表示 Internet Explorer 不再支援新的網路標準,可能無法使用新的應用程式來呈現網站內容,在瀏覽器支援度及網站安全性的雙重考量下,為了讓巴友們有更好的使用體驗,巴哈姆特即將於 2019年9月2日 停止支援 Internet Explorer 瀏覽器的頁面呈現和功能。
屆時建議您使用下述瀏覽器來瀏覽巴哈姆特:
。Google Chrome(推薦)
。Mozilla Firefox
。Microsoft Edge(Windows10以上的作業系統版本才可使用)

face我們了解您不想看到廣告的心情⋯ 若您願意支持巴哈姆特永續經營,請將 gamer.com.tw 加入廣告阻擋工具的白名單中,謝謝 !【教學】